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Turmoil

Tedious and Tremendous

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Comment from LisaCalton
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I love the simplicity of your chosen lines but the words you use make it a powerful poem. Well written. The last line encompassing storms in your own head. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You certainly brought the chaos here in the weather that also affects the mind too, your presentation had the desire affect, I am reaching for the aspirin now, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 26-Feb-2021
    Thank you
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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You did an excellent job with this pleiades poem. It is also a perfect way to describe my headaches. One thing you might consider, the first words are all singular except tornados. For balance you might want tornado touches down. Best of luck with this in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
    Thanks!