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A Partridge In A Pear Tree

12 long days

4 total reviews 
Comment from cupa tea
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Love this story!

I love that...ha, ha, ha...

If this story were about me, and it was my true love bringing all those gifts every day, I would much rather he brought me a partridge in a shiny new crock pot.

ha, ha, ha

Doesn't that sound so much more romantic than a bird freezing its tail feathers off up in a tree?

ha, ha, ha

They are what have kept me alive and breathing in spite of the drummers drumming hammering in my head.

Blessed Be

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021
    Thank you - thank you. I had fun playing with that one.
Comment from blondie560
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really liked your take on this. It's a great entry into the contest. I hope you're taking your true love on the winter vacation. Your take on the words remind me of the Jeff Foxworthy 12 redneck days of Christmas. This is a tough one to beat. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
    Thank you. I don't know about my true love, but I will take your 6 stars.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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12 days of binge foods :) " the fifth day of Christmas my true love gave to me
Five golden rings
Four orange Rolaids
Three chicken nuggets" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
    I had fun writing this, thank you for reading it.
Comment from equestrik
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This is an interesting perspective on the 12 days of Christmas song. You have analyzed it well and have given some fun things to think about. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021
    Thank you