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Panic Attacks

This is Not a Drill

2 total reviews 
Comment from ESOSTINE
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That is the reality of life, and some days are like that. Some times the source of the bad feelings in the day may not be clear to us. In my case however, I have discovered lately that my worst days are usually the days I left so much undone. Thanks for letting us into your world. Wishing you the peace and love you need.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    Thank you for you kind review, and your kind wishes. Thank you for sharing!
    Have a wonderful day,
    Westbrook
Comment from Possummagic
Good
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I think that your poem has potential. Your language could be more colourful but you gave the right idea. Keep working at it and you will surprise yourself. Review other writers work and see how they bring a poem to life using colourful words. Good luck. G

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2021
    Thank you for your kind wishes!
    Have a wonderful day,
    Westbrook
reply by Possummagic on 26-Mar-2021
    You?re welcome.