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12 Wishes Around the Globe (2nd ed)

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Second draft of a previously published work.

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This is sofunny:"
"Grandpa was many things," Ryan stated finally easing in the situation, "but I find it hard to believe he would forget an entire genie."

"Surely there's someone around who knows what happened," Barry told her.

"I already found his dogs," the genie sighed, "Unless one of you speaks 'bark,' I don't think they'll be much help."" Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    I found that hilarious myself
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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Ben:

This just got curioser and curioser (curioser is just a made-up word). I suppose I should have said more and more curious. Can't wait to meet the Tar Twins, or did I miss them in an earlier post? Anxiously awaiting your next post.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2021


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2021
    I'm pretty sure you got that word from Alice in Wonderland. And thank you