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Mealtime

Choices for three different meals

2 total reviews 
Comment from The_Boy_Whodunnit
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I think this is an imaginative idea - supper time sounds wonderful.

I think your syllable count is out for line 3 - you have 10 syllables - and line 6 - you only have 8.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
    Thank you for a 5 star rating and your detailed review. I realise that you must pronounce omelette as 3 syllables whilst I speak of it as two syllables, "om let ",and ,sour I pronounce as two syllables "sow er". Such is the English language.

Comment from lancellot
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This was an interesting and original idea for the contest. I will admit two things. 1) this is making me hungry. 2) I was confused as to what back bacon was and to look it up. Canadian Bacon.

Your counts and form are correct. Good luck.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much for a great review and good luck wishes. Back bacon is an item on the recipe list from our local food supplier.That is an interesting comment about Canada. I just know that back bacon comes mainly from the loin of the pig whereas streaky bacon comes entirely from the belly.
    I trust that you did have something to eat after reading my piece!