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My dead dog 5-7-5

Shes free but wont part if shes alive in our heart

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Comment from rightforyou
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I am sad to here about this loss of your pet. I think that by putting your feelings into a poem will help you heal.I enjoyed this 5-7-5 poem, they are some of my favorites to read and review...Thanks for being a new fan...Ron

See an empty bowl
The muddy tracks we did stroll
In my heart a hole

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    thanks ron means alot :) id put more poems on but im not a member so i cant :/
reply by rightforyou on 24-Jan-2012
    In time...for know keep them in your note book...Ron
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2012
    i will do :D i keep some on my laptop though :)
Comment from Joy Graham
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Aww, I feel this poem. I have loved and lost many pets over the years. I would have liked it better if you added a picture of some sort with your presentation. The 5-7-5 syllables worked for me. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2012
    THANKYOU SO MUCH!!! it means alot that someone understnadss..and oh...im new so i didnt know but i will next time! :D
Comment from Patti R.
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A very good 5-7-5 poem. Clearly stated and very nice rhyme. In very few words you have left the reader feeling saddened by the passing of a pet. I've lost many over the years, and there is something tremendously poignant to me about your mentioning the 'empty bowl' and 'muddy tracks', as I can easily recall these moments.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jan-2012
    thankyou very much.and i know - its so sad! :(
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello CerysBarbour
You need say no more your words yes, paint a very sad and vivid picture
Well done in so few words

Good luck to you in this contest.

Gert

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Hi Gert
    thankyou so much! :D
Comment from Allison78
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I know how you feel, it's so hard to lose a pet, I cried on and off for weeks. I think this is a wonderful poem and you have expressed your thoughts really well, great job!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2012
    Thankyou so much and i know its terrible! :(