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Crush

Short 5-7-5 haiku about my crush

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Comment from Charmane
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Is the crush on the trombone or the man behind the sounds. I like your light hearten little poem. Short in lines but large in thought. I am not too thrilled about the color scheme...but your write is truly excellent!

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 28-Nov-2012
    The man behind the sounds I'm new at this so I really didn't get the color scheme
reply by Charmane on 28-Nov-2012
    You did very well!Nessa.
Comment from alexisleech
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This does sound like a crush! Sadly because of the shortness of a 5/7/5 it's impossible to know whether this is anyone the subject knows, or some star who has to be admired from afar. Either way - he's obviously loved by someone.

Alexis x

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2012
    Very true thanks for the feedback