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The Berwick Witches Series: Book One

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Comment from F. Wehr3
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Really deep story. I absolutely loved it. I wanted more description of how Jessie/ demon looked. Maybe this has happened to others in previous chapters and have already described it. The other thing, very minor, is the switching back and forth between the characters. I can see it clearly after I re-read it, but the first time through it makes it somewhat difficult. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks, I'm hooked.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
    Thank you for your review. Really appreciate it.
Comment from ericawrites
Excellent
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This is a very interesting chapter,
holds the reader's attention from
start to finish. Good character
portrayal, interesting story,
good dialogue. Well done,
thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
    Thank you for your review.