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Sharing a vision

lets face it head on facts

6 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
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Hi my friend, so happy you are back writing, and its so true how u mentioned your feelings, and i will come back gradually as i broke both my ankles 3 weeks ago, and i need 2 months to heal. Its ok thank God i did not break my hip. I missed being here, and i missed u to. Love terry xoxo Keep writting.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    thank you terry for the beautiful starlight sorry to hear of your accident i pray this finds you well and in good health leaving a smile to say hi
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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hello mate. You know it just seems we are all in a political cocktail of bulls**t. So sick of the powers that be disrupting life and it all feels so familiar somehow. I'm a bit worried even and maybe especially down here at the bottom of the earth. Hope you are well. You have a strong voice and I daresay a little blood thirsty if things get too much worse. Keep writing it out my friend. Please let me know if there is any way I can help. Sending nothing but hugs to you and yours. xoxo Kiwi (deborah)

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2017


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
    thank you very kindly deborah smiling i am fine thank you deeply i dare say down under at the bottom of the earth has its own set of problems like ireland hugs back to you and yours from myself and old faithful the dog wishing you a blessed week
Comment from Lulube
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Good now becomes
a silent act
in fact, silenced
from having its own voice

Absolutely love that line above. You have much to say on this world and the human race as it is today. You are so right, where is goodness taught and lived by anymore? Power and status have taken over the help thy neighbor morals.
good write but don't get an ulcer over it, just practise in your own life and days lived, to be the person you want to be in your high moralistic values.

lulube

 Comment Written 12-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    dear friend my values gained merit when i faced major trials in life with no state support receiving many miracles on my journey has helped me understand the truth in ways smiling thank you deeply for the wonderful comment bless you pal
reply by Lulube on 20-May-2017
    bless you for sharing

    lulube
Comment from red6560
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I like your poem. I like the part "murdering peaceful actions taking away the right for us to chose directions an informed direction." I read it a few times, it is a thoughtful poem." I also like "Devalued is the word life" I wish you the best!

 Comment Written 12-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    its very thoughtfully written in part response calling for protection under law of our eight amendment thank you deeply red for the wonderful comment bless you
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Force is used trying to silence family views on rearing children correctly
Education has become the tainted actions against innocence's source
removing certain acts of faith from its doctrine morally wrong
Some virtues of so called wisdom needs to be examined for value
because in today's world the sad reality
devalued is the word life
foundations of war and bitterness hiding sins
Wow, this is so deep and intelligent, so many facts revealed, and yes I call them facts, for I believe strongly in them too. Kindest regards Meia and well done for speaking so plainly and truthfully x

 Comment Written 12-May-2017


reply by the author on 16-May-2017
    its deep in the sense striking home grown truths into the core of its existence meia there is no crossroads you are either one way or the other and for me killing is a cardinal sin in such actions peace never dwells thank you deeply for the wonderful comment sorry i am late replying wishing you a blessed week
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I'm not really sure how to classify this piece, but it may be better in the general prose section rather than as a script as it bears no typical script elements.

Maybe some punctuation would help with the flow and pacing of the piece.

Then again it may be a kind of blank verse poetry for all I know - lol but punctuation would ease the flow and understanding.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 12-May-2017


reply by the author on 12-May-2017
    it can be political verse script for me is something that could be spoken in the every day walk of life I am a free style writer with my own signature style thank you kindly for the lovely comment i pray you have a beautiful weekend