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Pebbles in my Shoe

Picking at old scabs.

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Comment from Brett Matthew West
Excellent
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Well crafted story as yours usually are. However, there were some things I questioned:

-in the second to last paragraph, (that starts with "I'll be the first..."), "from of any of this" should be "from any of this.

-should have a warning for language - the use of the word "shit".

-you list this as General Fiction, however, it is entered into a Non-Fiction Writing Contest?

Just some observations I noticed.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
    Thank you, Brett. Yes, I forgot to change the default category--I'll fix it. I'm not sure one 'shit' requires a warning, but that's me. Thank you again. Peace, Lee