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Dearly departed

34 syllable poem

4 total reviews 
Comment from angel123
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I enjoyed reading your well-written, meaningful poem. It flows well with memories of love. Your artwork choice is nice and it goes well with your message. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
    thank you dear friend for the excellent review! i truly treasure it! blessings and a hearty squeeze!
Comment from ragerde
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You have beautifully captured the deep sentiment of somebody who has lost a mother, taking it back to your earliest remembering. The accompanying photograph highlights the sentimental connection a child has with a loving parent.

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
    thank you dear friend for the excellent review! i truly treasure it! blessings and a hearty squeeze!
Comment from Lucian Carter
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Strong impact for 34 syllables. Definitely feels like a poem, not just chopped up flash. The image helps a lot and the ending, as open to interpretation as it is touches the heart. Good work and good luck with it.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
    thank you dear friend for the excellent review! i truly treasure it! blessings and a hearty squeeze!
Comment from luther maddox
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I like your poem it is clearly you wanted to express more. I am never into that ababa nor so many syllables or iambic junk. I like the mind of a poet was words flow to the imagination, to reexamine of what has been lived, to create a world of words expressing your complete thought. I can tell you have more to add to this prolific work.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
    thank you dear friend for the excellent review! i truly treasure it! blessings and a hearty squeeze!
reply by luther maddox on 09-Oct-2017
    you are welcomed