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Puppy Love and the Storm Above 2A

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Forces of Nature [Ending A]"
Ending A, Resurrection

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Comment from tango494
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Excellent narration, I loved your use of dialogue, I wish I had the same talent. The flow was easy to follow and it was a good read. I'm honored to be able to review and read your work :)

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Oh, thank you! :)
Comment from c_lucas
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A very strong fight scene. Nearly all of the demons were killed. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2017
    Thanks. The sentences following the first remind me a lot of those from other reviews you've done for me, though...