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Clever doggie

Teaching an old dog a new trick

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Comment from GLOBALEYES
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Great job in keeping the format. The picture was perfect. I want to give you 5stars but the last time I did it, I was told they got a 6star. I remember we are limited to the number of 6's and the month just started.
Anyway. You made this look easy. Betty Davis

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
    Thanks
Comment from frogbook
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Well done with the prompt-mission accomplished and we are able to enjoy one of the sweetest pictures ever to go with. Enjoyable read-best of luck.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Many thanks for your comments.
Comment from sandramitchell
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Perfect! Dogs love to chase their sticks, but better still, they love it when thrown into the sea. What an excellent 1-6-1 poem, and it rhymes too!! Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra x

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Many thanks
reply by sandramitchell on 01-Feb-2018
    You got my vote, good luck!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. It is not very easy to learn an old dog new tricks but it is possible after a whole load of patience and determination the old dog will get the new trick.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thanks Sandra. X
Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-six-one poem, Clever Doggy, creates, in its eight-syllable format, the action and fun of playing fetch with a playful and energetic puppy dog. I miss my lab now.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thanks, much appreciated.
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Good thing that dog's not an Akita hound. They refuse to fetch anything as they feel it's beneath them to do so.
But not this dedicated doggie, he's obviously raring to go!
Good luck to you in the contest, Jenintorre.
~Dean

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Thanks a bunch Dean. Much appreciated.
reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Feb-2018
    Anytime, Jen.
    ~Dean
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Just perfect. Uplifting little 8 syllable poem. I particularly like your use of the word "doggie." Love the photo as well. The dog seems so proud of his trick. Good luck in the competition

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
    Many thanks Debbie. Much appreciated.
Comment from Paws4FX
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Nicely done! Great picture too. I'm seeing a dog this evening that looks very much like that one. Good luck in the contest, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from lyenochka
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Good one with the three rhymes in this very restrictive form! I'm always impressed that the dogs who do the "stick trick" always seem to pick the largest stick possible.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello and smiles to you jenintorre
fun rhyming poem to read and the perfect photo of the dog doing his trick bringing back the stick
I like it

Gert

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
    Many thanks
reply by Gert sherwood on 31-Jan-2018
    You are welcome jenintorre
    you got my vote
    Gert