Miss Sadie
Limerick Contest Entry6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a great entry for the contest and I thought it might win because it has all the right ingredients! Lots of fun, naughtiness and humour! I really enjoyed it and I love Limericks, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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This is a great entry for the contest and I thought it might win because it has all the right ingredients! Lots of fun, naughtiness and humour! I really enjoyed it and I love Limericks, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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TY, TY, TY!!! Don't come on too often so took a few days to realize I had placed!!! lol God bless and hugs
Comment from Bill Schott
This limerick, Miss Sadie, is the winner in my book. You have the rhyme scheme, beat, and bawdy theme complete. This picture also reminds me of a girl I dated once. Only once.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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This limerick, Miss Sadie, is the winner in my book. You have the rhyme scheme, beat, and bawdy theme complete. This picture also reminds me of a girl I dated once. Only once.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2018
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Bill, thanks so much for the great review and lovely 5-star review. I had to give it a try...never wrote one before! God bless and hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
Great entry to the contest, dear anonymous poet. You have a perfect inflection for a Limerick which is hard to achieve and which very few entrants here professed.
Your picture is a bomb! (lol). I can understand how all men love her and women tear to bits. Excellent entry. On an aside note, I think it might benefit from centering.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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Great entry to the contest, dear anonymous poet. You have a perfect inflection for a Limerick which is hard to achieve and which very few entrants here professed.
Your picture is a bomb! (lol). I can understand how all men love her and women tear to bits. Excellent entry. On an aside note, I think it might benefit from centering.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2018
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ytbard, thank you eversomuch for such a lovely review and the 5-star rating on this contest entry. I truly appreciate that you took the time to read and leave your thoughts. I did like your suggestion to center the poem, however, I was not able to get it done before voting started. God bless and hugs.
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Looks great! Good luck in the contest.
Comment from strandregs
Well done with the form.
It lillts along nicely.
I used to write poo and piss limericks but it got boring.
Enjoy writing profound limericks.
here is a worse version for you:
while exposing her tits
she thinks of men's bits
And giving a stroke to poor Verdi
( composer)
Well - something like that.
good luck
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Well done with the form.
It lillts along nicely.
I used to write poo and piss limericks but it got boring.
Enjoy writing profound limericks.
here is a worse version for you:
while exposing her tits
she thinks of men's bits
And giving a stroke to poor Verdi
( composer)
Well - something like that.
good luck
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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lol....very funny! I love a good limerick...the nastier, the better! hahahaha Thank you for the kind review and the lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate both. God bless and hugs.
Comment from Pamusart
Limerick does souund like a fun form of poetry to write. This is a good entry for the contest. Bawdy with a good rhyming pattern. Funny. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Limerick does souund like a fun form of poetry to write. This is a good entry for the contest. Bawdy with a good rhyming pattern. Funny. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Pamusart, thanks so much for the kind and encouraging review and the lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate it. Have written so few limericks but do enjoy them. God bless and hugs.
Comment from Susan Burger
This is a fun little limerick you have penned here! And the artwork you have chosen certainly supports your story of Miss Sadie! Nice job. Good luck in this competition!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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This is a fun little limerick you have penned here! And the artwork you have chosen certainly supports your story of Miss Sadie! Nice job. Good luck in this competition!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Susan Burger, thanks very much for the kind and encouraging review and lovely 5-star rating. I truly appreciate it very much. Also, thanks for the wish of luck...will need it. God bless and hugs