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A kiss

Naani

7 total reviews 
Comment from Gloria ....
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This is a lovely Naani, author. Such a peaceful thought that a kiss is like a love song played on the skin.

Yes! That defines the zing of a welcomed kiss to perfection.

I wish you all the best in the contest.

Great job!

Gloria

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
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Writer you have Define a kiss better than Webster's Dictionary and I tell you I love it because the right kind of Kiss will make it hard go into Rhythmatic Arrest. And when you define a kiss as a love song written on the skin that is romantic and Epic a statement that Shakespeare would have died for. I love the description of a kiss I love the art that went with it I just love it thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
reply by Mary Hollingsworth on 13-Apr-2018
    My pleasure and hug you back
Comment from Bill Schott
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This naani, A Kiss, uses twenty-three syllables and four lines to translate the effects of a kiss into the energy that send one's heart beating faster and blood circulating to more areas than ever.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
Comment from cupa tea
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a kiss is a love song
written on the skin
it composes melodies
which pump hearts in tune

I'm not fond of that last line...
it just kinda hangs out there in limbo...

I like the idea of the poem and I get what you're trying to say...
I've no suggestions to fix it...not a poem writer myself...
I like the idea of it composing melodies or even memories on the skin...makes you think. I like stuff that makes you think...

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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Ah, I adore this. The line, "a kiss is a love song written on the skin" is so powerful and romantic. Naani is an interesting poetry style and you've written a perfect one. Great contest entry!

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
Comment from Harry Smith
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I like the picture. This is a very good entry to the contest and I hope you do well. I really enjoyed the read and could relate to the poem.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Naani writing prompt.
Your description of a kiss is lovely.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2018


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2018
    thank you dear friend for the kind review! i am humbly grateful! blessings and a hearty hug!