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I'm having a real bad day

Things can't get much worse

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Comment from Kerry Robinson
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lol, this is such a cute poem for the repetition poetry contest, Jen. You did a fantastic job on this with nice humor mixed in. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"I'm having a real bad day" is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    Thank you so much for the great review.
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 22-Jul-2018
    jenintorre,

    You certainly deserved the great review.

    Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
    the Duchess
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi. This is a good entry for the contest. I hope it is not autobiographical.

"there's builders in next door".

Why not this since builders is plural.

"there are builders next door"

Here in the states shone and on do not rhyme but they probably do elsewhere.

And finally you can't blame the poor cat. Lol. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    It came second in the contest. It was first in the voting all the way through then I was pipped at the post at the last minute. I find these contests so much fun. Thanks for reading Jen x
reply by Pamusart on 22-Jul-2018
    Congrats! I never enter the blind contests.
Comment from Janet Foor
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Great artwork and presentation to compliment your poem. A very bad day Indeed. Good repeating line to follow the contest rules. Nice abcb rhyme.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jul-2018
    Many thanks Janet
Comment from LynnetteOK
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That's definitely the making of a real bad day! I think it's a sign of true strength to be able to laugh when life dumps on you. Very well done!
Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Joan E.
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Both your title and artwork selection caught my attention. Your use of the first person and repetition plus rhymes were effective in emphasizing your bad day. I hope things improve and best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Many thanks for uour great review Joan.
Comment from Blue Hendrix
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Nicely written poem very nice flow. I didn't see
any Corrections that need to be made. Nice imagery good word choices and I think you just did an overall very good job.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Ma y thanks for your comments.
Comment from meeshu
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a very, very good--bad day. thought for sure it would rain on your just-washed car. reader had fun even if the writer did not, sorry..

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 21-Jul-2018
    Thanks Meeshu. Glad you liksd it.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Looks like you had a bad day. What a mess with the cat poo on the mat.
Good rhymes and humor. I have deer poo in my yard. He eats my flowers
and tomatoes. Look forward to the next day. Great entry and repeats.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Boogienights
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This is very funny and I like the image you paired it with. I think we have all had days like that where nothing goes right. I love cats so I can't find fault lol. This is a great contest entry and I see you are winning so you don't need my best wishes..but you've got them anyway.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2018


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2018
    Many thanks for your comments. Glad you like it.