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Final journey

Entering the unknown.

36 total reviews 
Comment from poetwatch
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Very good mysterious author. You capture the essence of what goes on in all our lives. We wander the world when young, we gather all we can when mature, and then at a later date we ponder on what we have done and "what lies ahead." This is a good entry for the 10 Word Poem.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Many thanks for your great review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Oh my goodness this is good. You should have saved this one for the real money unless you have more like this up your sleeve. I can't express how much I like your how, when, and what poem. Your waiting and wondering line is perfect. I'll be voting and keeping up with the results. If you don't win, something is wrong.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Debbie you are a star . I love your review. Thanks. X
reply by Debbie Pope on 30-Aug-2018
    I just voted. I see you are in first place. Fingers crossed here. I think you are a guaranteed winner.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thanks for your confidence. X
Comment from Dean Kuch
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These are the sort of thoughts that those in their twilight years have go through their minds.
What awaits me on the other side?
Is there really something after death besides the cold, cruel confines of the grave?
If we're Christians and believe in the teachings of the Bible then we already know the answers.
You managed to say quite a bit in just ten words.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thanks for the review Dean.
reply by Dean Kuch on 30-Aug-2018
    You're welcome.
Comment from hargunanand
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This is what i fear when i will grow old but yes we all have to go through this unknown entry. This is such a thoughtful ten words creation. Best of luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from l.raven
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Amen...as we age we all wonder where we will land...
when we pass where will we be living eternity...
when will that time take place...???...I love your poem...
and your picture...perfect...very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thanks a lot Linda
reply by l.raven on 30-Aug-2018
    You are so very welcome....love xxoo
Comment from kathleenspalding
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This thoughtful Ten Word Poem is excellent for the picture and the prompt. Perfect choice of artwork and colors. I see nothing to correct. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Many thanks Kathleen
reply by kathleenspalding on 30-Aug-2018
    You're welcome
Comment from Craigitar
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And the older one gets, the more one wonders these things. Very well done! Well composed and delivered and speaks a universal truth. Great pic to accent your words. I expect this will do well in the contest--maybe even win. Good job!

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Many thanks
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
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What a heartfelt emotion you have written: the end of life ponderings. This is a well-written poem of only ten words. It speaks volumes about the deepest feelings humans must face. A wonderful contest entry.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 30-Aug-2018
    Thank you so much Cindy
Comment from Kerry Robinson
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This is an interesting 10 words for the contest. Waiting and wondering what lies ahead makes sense. How and When what lies ahead has me a bit confused. But, I think I caught your sentiment here. Good luck! ~Kerry

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
    Many thanks
reply by Kerry Robinson on 29-Aug-2018
    Welcome.
Comment from zanya
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Ten word poem prompt effectively used here to portray what we all ultimately must face as we age - the prospect of discovering what lies 'beyond' - nice pic

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2018


reply by the author on 29-Aug-2018
    Many thanks