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Haiku(Its time now over)

Haiku

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Comment from Poetic Friend
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Wow, this is haiku, in its brevity, contains many layers. One of the obvious layer is the leaves, one by one, becoming detached from the tree. The leaf is cognizant that soon its time will come to leave and become detached as well. Metaphorically speaking, it could speaks for human nature as well.

This poem is well-done. It is not easy to write a short poem with multiple layers, but you did. Bravo!

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Cedar
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This is a very well written Haiku and your presentation picture really goes well with your words.

I wish you the best of luck in the contest...Bill

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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This is sad and tragic piece of writing. It is definitely not going to be your time only but millions along. We are all going this way....young or old. Do not make a tragedy of it. Our spirit needs renewing. We are definitely not like a stray autumn leaf falling.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you .it was not intended to appear tragic but more as an acceptance of the inevitable end.
Comment from Loredana
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The life of a leaf. Nice Haiku. I have a question, though. In the first line, did you mean, 'its time now over' as in the time of the leaf, or 'it is time now over'? The second one doesn't make much sense. The first one makes more sense as it relates to the leaf in question.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    It's time , time. of leaf.
    thank you for reading and reviewing.
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem is sad and reminds me of that song, 'Autumn.' 'All the leaves are down and the sky is grey.' I think with your short poem you convey the song really well. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Sugarray77
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I like your moving sentiment depicted in your Haiku. It is a very good entry for the Poetry contest and I wish you good luck. Well constructed with a good presentation. All the best.

Melissa

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much.