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One Cookie At A Time

How to over come this curse

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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The Cookie Monster on Sesame Street would be very proud to say this. For me, multiple cookies are a better balance, especially with a cold glass of milk or a hot tea.

Great illustration to reinforce your writing club inspired verse!

To be consistent with your poem's structure, consider adding a period and/or making 'A' uncapitalized.


 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2019
    Than you for taking time to read my poem, and have a blessed day.
    That is one of my many weakness in writing. I will thank you again.
    Cookie
Comment from Debra White
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Hello Cookie :)
I just love your 6 word memoir! We could've written the same one, I have the same problem!
Fun presentation really suits your words.
Nicely done.
Best wishes, Debra :) x

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem, I'm glade you liked it cookie
Comment from Darlene BoClair
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I love everything about this flash fiction club entry. I love the cookie monster. I love being a foodie like yourself. I love thinking that just thinking about food make me fat. Cheers to all who write flash fiction in less than 6 words.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem, I'm glade you liked it cookie
Comment from Joan E.
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I relished this poem. I am going to put a copy on my refrigerator! My real "balanced diet" does not lead to weight loss or my feeling better, but I can't take any chances and won't give it up. Smiles

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2019
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem, I'm glade you liked it
    Me either (smile)
    cookie
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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LOL! This is a delightful contribution to the Contest Challenge, Cookie! Good thing you took time to write this as it took your mind off food and probably saved you some extra calories :). God bless and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    Thank you for you for those kind word , would you believe I'm just about to eat lunch and it a real balance meal, I will have a few cookies with milk after
    Cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written six-word flash fiction idea about losing weight is to not eat cookies one at a time but to seriously looking to eat more healthy and in smaller portions.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    Thank you for you for those kind word , would you believe I'm just about to eat lunch and it a real balance meal, I will have a few cookies with milk after
    Cookie
Comment from JudyE
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I like this. For sure that is a balanced diet. haha. I also like to say I have a very balanced person - I have a chip on each shoulder. Cookies are hard to resist, aren't they? :)

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    I'm please you got a chuckle from me poem yew cookies are hard to resist. that is how I got the nick name cookie as a child and of course I'm very resistible
    thank you for sharing
    have a safe and blessed week-end
    cookie
reply by JudyE on 12-Jul-2019
    Thank you Cookie. I think you mean you're very irresistible - but that's okay. :)
Comment from Heather Knight
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You're hilarious, Cookie. And I can relate to this post. I put on weight quite easily and then find it very difficult to lose it.
Thanks so much for sharing. I love it.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    I'm please you like it. It is nice to know I'm not alone with this thinking problem
    Have a safe and blessed week end
    Cookie
Comment from Gloria ....
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Yay, Cookie! A balanced meal is a cookie in each hand. This is just such a great entry in the club and a six word memoir it is.

Love this, and your sense of humour shows through brilliantly. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    I'm please you like it. It is nice to know I'm not alone with this thinking problem
    Have a safe and blessed week end
    Cookie
Comment from BeasPeas
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Love this, Cookie. An appropriate teeny story write about a cookie by a Cookie. I agree. I love food, especially sweets. Yes, just thinking about food makes me fat, too, so I have to stop thinking about it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2019


reply by the author on 12-Jul-2019
    Thank you very much for taking time to read my Cookie Monster Poem
    I'm please you like it. It is nice to know I'm not alone with this thinking problem
    Have a safe and blessed week end
    Cookie