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In Memory Of My BB

He's life is over to soon, for what?

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Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Life isn't promised from day to day. We never know when it will come to an end. It is best to be ready. One of my closest friends came to the Lord because some driving by yelled out, "Jesus love you!" She looked into it more and found it true. She was an amazing person. She died of cancer about 15 yrs ago, but I don't doubt she will meet many in heaven she helped led there. You never know BB may have taken your words to heart and be there too. I hope so. Rox

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thank you for those encouraging words about BB I'm sure he did and with the Father.as for your fried I know she's up there also
    Have a blessed Sunday
    Cookie
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Cookie. I am so sorry to hear of this tragedy. God bless you all and BB, too. Nowadays we don't know when we kiss them goodbye if they will be home again. Marilyn

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thank you for those kind words. That is why when people leave my home or at the end of a phone conversation I say no good bye but "Save trip and, Jesus loves you so do I"
    Have a blessed Sunday.
    Cookie
Comment from Heather Knight
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I'm so sorry for your loss, Cookie. Both your poem and your notes are heartbreaking.
Young people shouldn't die... Life is difficult to understand sometimes.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019

    Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful words
    I don't understand why they think light about life or death
    .cookie
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt Cinquain about the death of a beloved grandson, it is hard to let go of a child son young for no real reason. I am really sorry for your loss.

A cinquain consists of 2,4,6,8,2 syllables

Your Cinquain

What I been searching for

Sunrise (2)
Just another day (5)
It is not for everyone (7)
It's all about love and freedom (8)
This is what I want. (5)

Suggested corrections for this Cinquain to spread the most beautiful message of the love and freedom we all seek and some may find it while others may not.

Title: I'm searching

Sunrise (2)
just one more day (4)
someone may not wake up (6)
we always seek love and freedom (8)
to share (2)




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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for reading my write, and for you kind help Have a blessed day.
    Cookie
Comment from Gloria ....
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My goodness, this is just such sad news, Cookie. Your great-grandson was such a good-looking young lad and now his life has been cut short.

Hugs to you for your strength to get through this.

Thinking of you.

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you for those kind words about my BB and comforting words to me and the family.
    I'm standing on praying ground.
    Cookie
Comment from Cindy Warren
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I'm so sorry you lost your great grand son. I can't even imagine how awful that would be. Love your poem. I hope you have years of sunrises and the freedom to enjoy them.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your kind and comforting word and from the depths of my heart my family and i thank you.
    Peace God be with you.
    Cookie
Comment from karenina
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What?! I am so sorry! My deepest condolences even as I embrace, with disbelief this horrible tragedy! What is wrong with this world when a bright young man can be murdered during an argument? YOu honor his memory when you write of his life. I will pray for your entire family, and pray that he is resting in Jesus' arms.--Karenina

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your kind and comforting word and from the depths of my heart my family and I thank you.
    Peace God be with you.
    Cookie
reply by karenina on 07-Sep-2019
    I am praying for each of you as you walk through this time of grief.--Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for they are needed now and the day of he funeral more
    God bless you .
    Cookie
reply by karenina on 07-Sep-2019
    My heart breaks for you...karenina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
    Thank you for those comforting word
    Cookie.
Comment from Spangle
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I am so sorry for your heartbreaking loss. This dark world needs Jesus more than ever. It looks like you have a wonderful family. I am seventy-five and only have one six-year old grandson. They are wonderful little beings.

My heart goes out to all of you at this most difficult time.
In Christ's forever love, Spangle

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your kind and comforting word and from the depths of my heart my family and I thank you.
    Peace God be with you.
    Cookie
reply by Spangle on 07-Sep-2019
    You're very welcome, my friend. xo
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
    Until next time,
    Cookie
Comment from Maria Millsaps
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That is such a sad story, and it happens a lot.  The family picture is awesome. I recommend you delete the title, it's not needed. Sorry to hear about your loss.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for you comforting words to me. They truly touched my heart and soul.
    I'm standing on praying ground which is keeping me strong
    I removed the title but change it to this it made me feel much better. Thank you.
    God bless you.
    Cookie
Comment from Teri7
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Miss Cookie, This is a very sad cinquain poem you have penned about your grandson that was killed on Labor Day. I am so sorry that happened my friend. You are in my prayers! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
    Thank you very much for your kind words about BB and for you comforting words to me. They truly touched my heart and soul.
    I'm standing on praying ground which is keeping me strong
    God bless you.
    Cookie