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2019 part 4

Viewing comments for Chapter 84 "Miss Mushroom and Mr. Toadstool"
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is an ideal children's poem and I really liked it and it made me think that my poems might be a bit too grown up for children! This is a fun write Barb, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I thank you
Comment from samantha0930
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I think this is a very nice and cute poem, and an entertaining story as well. I don't get the reference at the end, so I'm guessing it's from something that I haven't heard of before.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    The feud between the Hatfields and McCoys of Kentucky fame it very well known. It is on Wikepedia. Thank you for the great review
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, I am honored
Comment from Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Oh my goodness! How adorable is this? A basket of kittens adorable, a newborn's first gas-grin adorable, a ... Well, you get the picture. Seriously fun poetry Barb, and flawless meter and rhyme!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, I am honored
reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 13-Oct-2019
    I should have waited to review it so I had a six for it! It's a charmer, Barb. :)
Comment from Teri7
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Barb, This is a very cute poem about Miss Mushroom and Mr. Toadstool. You used very cute descriptive words and an adorable picture. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, I had to do one on the picture.
Comment from lyenochka
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Oh, how cute!!! You've made a mushroom version of Romeo and Juliet or West Side story or something like that! And you're not too far off because mushrooms can reproduce asexually (all the genetic material is the same) or sexually where two different sets of genes form a new mushroom. I suppose your love story is possible! ?º

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    LOL oh yes I hope so too. Thank you so much
Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Barb, about mushrooms (I hate) and toad stools which I'm sure I'd hate too, if they were edible, oh, let's face it, you can keep the whole fricking family, they're bastards!

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
    LOL love your take on it. No mushrooms on PIzza? AAAWWWW Thank you
reply by Mike Stevens on 13-Oct-2019
    Nope, sorry, I have a rule, anything I eat can't be grown under a wet log!
Comment from damommy
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How cute! Feuding fungi families. lol.

Love the word 'toadshrooms.' What an good imagination you have. I like how you showed she's been pampered, but he comes from a hard background.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you , saw the picture and you know the rest. LOL
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Cute artwork, Barb.
-A cute poem to go with it!
-I like "toadshrooms"
-I like the verse about
where they come from-
rich soil vs. a dive.
-A very good conclusion
to cute tale.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you , saw the picture and you know the rest. LOL
reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2019
    You are welcome, and I know what you mean about the picture- it often speaks to us:)
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is such an adorable story, Barb. I wish I had six stars left for you.
I like your mushroom version of West Side Story, Romeo and Juliet and the like.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Thank you , saw the picture and you know the rest. LOL