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2019 part 4

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Comment from Ricky1024
Exceptional
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"Please Use Me"
Was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Truer words never *Said.
Editor's Note:
*Said: verb.
speak, utter, communicate.
"My house is Empty but my Heart?"
Tis full....
(Theology 48.09)
...
"And, as I read this....
"I first thought of those hurting Souls...
"And, then I thought of my life."
...
"I thought of my wife who has been gone 17 years and my son."
"Both victims together of a "Greater Force"
...
"And, then I thought...
"Please Use Me?"
"On March 31st, 2003."
"I'm sure my son at one point...
(Even though He was Brain Damaged and then later became Brain-dead." "Heard those words spoken and reinterated."
...
"He heard His Father above."
"And, responded by giving us the strength and ability to donate His organs._
...
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'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
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And, thanks for this.
Ricky

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Wow you have truly made my day
Comment from BeasPeas
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A very nice free verse on how we can be helpful to others with God's guidance. Not everyone can minister to the sick, but there are other ways to be helpful. Nicely done. Marilyn

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the understanding review. Just had to get on my soap box
Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi Barb,
This is a very strong poem with a very clear message. You have such a way of getting your point across. Sometimes e feel like we are the only ones putting in the effort but God knows what work we do. I'm sorry you feel alone sometimes Barb. Wish I could be there for you sometimes. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I got on my soap box on this one. Thank you
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A wonderful offering of prayer, Barb -- so very important to pray for the opportunity to be His hands and feet.... your format here just perfect as it alternatively presents instances of need and calls for direction... thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I got on my soap box on this one. Thank you
reply by Y. M. Roger on 15-Oct-2019
    LOL!! And I listened willingly.... no cactus. :) :)
Comment from Sasha
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I found this deeply moving and conveys a powerful message of being there for people that need us. Beautifully written and I just love the message you convey with this one.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I got on my soap box on this one. Thank you
Comment from Nowhereman1
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This is a very well written poem. The poems structure and rhyme scheme we a little unusual but it flowed nicely. I like the message and it was very uplifting. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I got on my soap box on this one. Thank you
Comment from Raul1
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Spoken in true words. I have enjoyed reading this poem. No grammatical errors. Excellent work! It is interesting and unique. I like how you wrote this poem. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, sometimes I have to get on my soap box and rant
reply by Raul1 on 15-Oct-2019
    You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt poem. While we are still able to move around we can ask God to use us to go to the ones who need help and comfort in their lives.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the understanding review and for making my day
Comment from robyn corum
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Barb,

Wow. When you need a wake-up call, here comes Barb H. with her parade and horns blaring. Nice job. Okay, okay. I'm AWAKE already. This is powerful and important and needs to be said. I'm listening. THANK YOU!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
    Thank you for being so kind, I am just so tired fighting my own battles and helping others the best I can because no one wants to get their hands dirty. Thank you dear friend
reply by robyn corum on 15-Oct-2019
    I adore you. Sending hugs-