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Aaron's Dragons

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An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs

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Comment from brenda bickers
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Hi Cindy,
Another great chapter. Oh, I dread those cliff hangers, I just want to keep reading. I wonder why Sky had such a thick shell, is there something special about here? I do hope black can eventually make friends and fit in with the others. I'll keep reading if you keep posting.
Brenda.x

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I plan to keep posting as long as people keep reading. Thanks for staying tuned and enjoying my story.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Good episode. Aaron is there alone, but that's good. It may keep the visitors from looking in the woods, for surely they heard voices from inside and knew someone was there. They have no reason to harm Aaron... do they?

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Aaron will be okay. Who would look after the dragons? I don't want to give too much away.
Comment from Katherine M. Kean
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I've missed a couple of chapters, but decided to read the latest, then go and catch up over the weekend. It hasn't done any harm to read this way, as the storyline still has enough repetition (a hatching every time) to do this, whilst there is now strong storylines, that are not let too complex that I get lost. Overall it has a nice well-rounded feel to it, and moves along at a good pace.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I'm thinking of hatching the last two together. Then they need to get busy. I don't think you'll have any trouble catching up.
Comment from tfawcus
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Good foreshadowing of danger all through this chapter and it ends with an irresistible hook!
Sky sounds like an interesting addition to the dragon family.
A couple of comments:

"I did it again," Pink squealed after made it about the same distance (???)

White was (almost) shaking with frustration.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Looks like I have some editing to do in the morning. Thanks for catching that.
reply by tfawcus on 19-Oct-2019
    Loving this story.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Aaron's state of living has been so fateful, peace is ever beyond his world, Pink flew out, White somehow managed, he threw Duane out, but Aaron was trapped; well said, well done.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I'm so glad you're staying tuned and enjoying my story.