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2019 part 4

Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "The Rapture"
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Comment from Ricky1024
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'The Rapture'
Is a '16 Word Horror Contest Entry'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great week
Ricky

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
    What could be more scary? Thank you
Comment from damommy
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This is a true horror story, to think of not being including in the lambs. That should give everyone a good scare. Fantastic picture, Barb, very appropriate for the theme.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    I thought so too, thank you so much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You chose an unexpected topic for this poem-but it SURELY works. The Bible describes end-time scenes that make our horror movies look like Loony Tunes! GOOD JOB

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    I am honored and I thank you for the understanding reivew
Comment from lyenochka
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Now, that's a unique Halloween poem! I haven't read or heard much about the Rapture since the 1970's but you're right that it would be a shocking event. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    It said horror and I don't think of anything more horrific than seeing others going and me not. Thank you
reply by lyenochka on 18-Oct-2019
    That's so true! ♥