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A FS member Senryu contest.

3 total reviews 
Comment from May 1
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I think this is a nice way of putting it. I really like this poem and the way it is written. All in all, this poem is very enjoyable to read and offers a different perspective than what people usually think.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
    It seems that there are so many calculus advice and how to live and how to survive, but there seems to be so little advice about getting old. Thank you for your review, May.
Comment from rspoet
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the senryu contest
with an observation many can relate to on fanstory.
As long as you have your health, there is a whole new world
of opportunities.
Excellent picture to match
Good luck in the contest
Robert

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your most positive review, Robert.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very nice and well written senyru you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery with the picture you chose. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2020


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2020
    Thank you, Teri. Your review is most appreciated.