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Sparkling Spring

The dazzling array of Spring.

18 total reviews 
Comment from djsaxon
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Really inventive use of the precious gems 'catalogue'. Solid AABB rhyme throughout. Until now I have not been privileged to enjoy your pen. I would like to read more - DJ

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2020


reply by the author on 07-Mar-2020
    How wonderful. Be my guest. Thank you for your exceptional review. I love it.
Comment from moongirlwriter
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I'm with you. . .possibly my favorite season. There is such a renewed feeling that hits my senses, kind of rebirth. This is when the outdoors beckons to me to come outside and go for a walk or a bike ride. I confess, my daily chores must wait until I return.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    The best time of the year for contemplation. Thank you for a very interesting review.
reply by moongirlwriter on 28-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Bicpen
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Excellent descriptive meditation and has a good delivery with a well thought through idea with a good sense of rhythm and rhyme. It displays the season with gratitude.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    As I display my pleasure in your review, with gratitude. I love your wprds.
Comment from victor 66
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What a wonderful perspective you have in the coming season! You have very good rhythm and a very nice rhyme to your words. I found your poem about spring most uplifting. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    That is so good to hear. Thank you for your great review.
reply by victor 66 on 29-Feb-2020
    You are most welcome, Raffaelina.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they area perfect match. You captured my attention from the first line to the last. I love how you use jewellery to express your magical surrounding.
Thank you for sharing.
Have a safe and blessed week-end.
Cookie

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Well, you captured my heart with your laudatory descriptions of my work. Thank you so much for your encouraging words.
Comment from heavenempress
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Exceptional piece of poetry. I enjoyed the simple but vivid expression of spring's joy. Excellent use of vocabulary and superby image. Keep it up and well structured stanzas.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you for the exemplary review. Encouragement is so welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You brought the vibrant scenes of spring here through your poetic eyes, I struggled with the flower here a little, but I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
    Thank you for your uplifting review. Your words are appreciated.
Comment from RShipp
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Your picture matched your poem nicely.

I enjoyed your usage of all 'the jewels' in your descriptions.

You did a good job at avoiding the banished words.

Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    Thank you for a very uplifting review. I appreciate your words.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This springtime poem, Sparkling Spring, brings many precious stones up from the earth to dazzle the reader with springtime's beauty. Nice.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    Bill, thank you. This review feeds my ego, but humbles me at the same time. Love it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem for Spring. We get tired of the winter cold and monocolored scenes and we cannot wait for Spring to see some green sprouts and splashes of color.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
    I believe the splashes of color are an alarm that tunes us into Spring and keeps us alert to see the new growth as each day passes.