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My Tabu

My witchy baby

10 total reviews 
Comment from sherrygreywolf
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I've known cats like this. My son had one I called psycho-kitty. I was never even sure what it's real name was - haha. But you're right - when they're sweet, they're sweet. But then out comes the evil clone. Good job describing this one is so few syllables!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2020


reply by the author on 09-Jun-2020
    Thanks, again. My son calls her Psycho Cat, lol. He now has custody of her and finds shes mellowed a bit. Take care, Sherry.
reply by sherrygreywolf on 10-Jun-2020
    I think most of us mellow a bit with age - LOL!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2020
    Hopefully ;)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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I like this. I haven't owned many cats. The ones that I've owned and been around fit this description perfectly. I like what you've done with this and enjoyed reading this well thought out and well written work. Well done!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much for the nice review and comments. Take care.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL -- split personality indeed...guess that's one way to label them...!! ;) A great offering for this 5-7-5 contest today - thanx for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much, my dear friend. I appreciate the nice review and comments, as always ;)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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My witchy baby
My Tabu

Hello my friend

A fine entry for the 5-7-5 Pet Poetry writing contest. Beautiful presentation. Good syllable count. Great connection between lines. Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you, kind Gypsy, for a great review. Take care :)
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem is true of all house cats. They can be mean when they want to be. I like the artwork mixes the black cant with books about witchcraft to show the scary supersticious side of black cats. And the title is a good plaly on words the tabby and tabu.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much for the thorough review and comments. The title is actually her name. She is named after the perfume my dad brought my mom back from Paris in WWII. plus it just fit her :) I appreciate your well-wishes. Take care, my friend :)
reply by dragonpoet on 08-Apr-2020
    You are most kindly welcome on all accounts.
    dp
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    :)
Comment from kahpot
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Love it, very well written as your words give us the image we can not see, wonderful photo, as well as "pet" I think this is almost "horror" with the image rom both photo and words, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much for the great review and kind words. Take care :)
Comment from Earl Corp
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Your poem describes the cat, Spook, we have now to a tee. The picture you chose to accompany the poem is awesome. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much, Earl for the nice review and kind comments. I enjoyed your story about your fast-draw experience :) Take care.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are such poignant words as a cat has an instinct to kill but also to enjoy snuggled up and giving affection, they are solitary most of the time, confident and enjoy human attention, I reckon this write is a winner, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much, Dolly for the great review and kind word. My Tabu is very affectionate. She would sleep on my face if I would let her lol. Take care :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is great! I think your first line is my favorite. And anyone that has met a cat will relate to that! Very nicely done. Just three lines and you say so much! Well written!

 Comment Written 08-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much, Michael. I appreciate the nice review and you kind comments :) Take care, Marcia
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Oh, my God, this is so cute. I just love this poem is so perfect. and the picture you choose it's one in a million :"Half honey ~ half beast
Split personality lurks
Beneath sheathed talons"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
    Thanks so much, Iza. I treasure this little witch. She is named for the perfume my dad brought back to my mom from Paris during WWII. And because she was my son's, having her helps me feel in touch with him :) So glad you enjoyed it.