Reviews from

My Girl Friend

A FS member 1-6-1 rhyme contest.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Paul Borders
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Thanks for this submission. Lots of times, I click on an entry to read it without expecting much but this one made me chuckle. It's the clear winner in this contest in my opinion.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 14-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much, Paul. I'm glad it gave you a chuckle and if you thought it should be a winner, then perhaps it is. Best wishes.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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You said so much in these three lines. I loved it! It's like a love letter in 8 words. And you even managed to rhyme your lines. Loved the picture of the red haired girl and your artistic presentation. This should do extremely well in the contest, good luck int the booths.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2020
    Thank you very much for your kind review. Contests are always up in the air and you never know how they're going to turn out.
Comment from Leigha Winfrey
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So who is the red head that knocks you dead ted? Just wondering. Good use of 1-6-1. Also what made you write about this, was it someone you are secretly in love with or just something you put together?

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2020
    My wife.