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MY Open Book

The way I feel about my life

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Comment from phil nelson
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I suspect that everyone who reads your poetry will say "well done!" right now--another fine poem, simple yet very forceful in its message, with a gentle rhythm and rhyme to help the reader enjoy these great words1
All the Best!

phil

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from Mary Furlong
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I'll say well done right now. Your rhyme and meter are, as always, right on. This poem was a delight to read. Very well done indeed! Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, another charming write by this prolific writer, again in smoothly rendered rhyming rhythm - well and easily said, with just the right nostalgic touch...

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from Mia Twysted
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I just love your stuff. YOu have somany positive messages that you are sending out there into the world. I hope others, just not us here on Fanstory are benefiting from them.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from harmony13
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These are engaging, inspiring, meaningful and creative. I like the way
this author's sums up life as an open book. Thank you for the author's
notes they compliment and add to this great poem.
Hope you are having a great day!.....Maria

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from nancy_e_davis
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I love the down to earth simplicity of your poem, Bill.
But, when my last, long course is run
I hope someone will say "well done''.
I can say your Poem is well done.
God Bless you, Nancy:)

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from Laurie Holding
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You go, Jaybird! I love reading your work, and you gave me a great coffee break in my day with this one. Thank you for this little treasure of poesy; it is well done, metered well, and worth a read aloud. Nice job!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from RShipp
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The simplicity of the statements made in this poem makes it a classic.

I especially liked the second stanza.

Enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from Cedar
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Hello Jay,

This one is filled with wise words for the younger generation to follow. You're rhyming is perfect. Thank you for sharing this with us...Bill

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020

Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a simple retelling of a life lived by anyone. Writing allows you to let others see who you are. We all hope the last line is true.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2020