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Cinquain

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Comment from sandramitchell
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Where, indeed! I liked this one, I think the term 'family' needs clarifying for many people, so they know under God's eyes, they are not different people to Him, but they are all his children. Until people realise that, this stupid word will live on. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Sandra, I am pleased to read your wonderful insights and thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Paul Borders
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Uhzacklee !! Good point. I'm so tired of hearing the word "racism". Ninety-nine percent of people use it incorrectly. I like the fact you started with Adam. Then made the point we are all the human race.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Paul and thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts/insights.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Cinquain. There is only one human race although we are devided in two groups there USCG he evil ones who do evil, and live on evilness. The other group is kind and loving God fearing abd do good to others. Skin color doesn't devide us we are devided by good or evil.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Sandra and thank you very much for the wonderful insights, I agree with you.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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Many would not want to admit or believe that we all began in Africa. We all have many races in our deepest geneology. This will draw the reader in to debate in their head or with oithers, this question. Well thought out.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Liz and thank you for your time and the thoughtful insights.
Comment from Mia Twysted
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Good question to put out there into the world. We are all family and all come from the same starting duo, depending on what you believe. Why can't we just see human.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Mia, I appreciate your visit and the kind comments, thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Nice entry for the Family writing prompt contest. It follows the contest rules well.

I like the idea that we all come from the same family.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Gypsy, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
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Amen! This whole concept of "race" was a man made categorization that is not of God and it has caused so much grief to humanity. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello friend, I thank you for your visit and the insights.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
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This is a good writing entry for the Family writing prompt. It is a happy poem and should do well in the contest. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2020
    Hello Rebecca, I thank you for stopping by and am glad that you like the poem.
reply by thaities, Rebecca V. on 25-Aug-2020
    You're quite welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your contest entry makes a valid point, Mystery Writer. Good job with the cinquain style. You give readers much to think about which is good. I like your image choice. It would be great if the world could read this and take your advice.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
    Hello Jan, I appreciate your encouraging review and the thoughtful comments, thank you.
Comment from RShipp
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'Where did the term racial come from?' What an excellent question! I think that this concept has to be learned and then mimicked.

Well done.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2020


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2020
    Hello friend, I appreciate your time and the thoughtful comments, thank you.