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Through Trial to Triumph

4 total reviews 
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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The characters have been very smoothly introduced. The description of Monique's disability and the aids used to help her personally and in her bookstore, has been done well to familiarize the reader with her lifestyle.
It is assumed that Jefferson and Monique will be interacting in upcoming chapters, that I look forward to reading. The story promises to be very
interesting from the outline provided.

Ralf

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2020
    Thank you. Yes, it will take a couple of chapters, but they will meet. Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a well written chapter. I like the pacing of your book so far. You take your time for us to get to know the characters. The dialogue is strong and "real". An enjoyable read. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Interesting perspective from the point of view of a person in a wheelchair. Now that I think about, I never had any thoughts, and for sure I don't consider that a person in wheelchair is pariah. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Bramsey Ringleb
Exceptional
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I loved the story telling, characters, details and writing. I was completely drawn in, and I can't wait for more of this book! It is obvious that this is a skilled writer, not one who makes rookie mistakes. I can't think of a single suggestion. I will just be on the lookout for more.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 10-Sep-2020
    Thanks. This came about after years of practice. You should have seen the "rookie" draft. ;)