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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Are you promoting a previous chapter, or is just a short trip back in time to give Abigail a break after the attack. Nice to let us know how the kids come to USA. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    I'm editing and promoting all chapters in this story ... I just fell behind in getting that done. Thank you for continuing to read.
Comment from Bramsey Ringleb
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Again, I feel like this chapter deserves 5 stars. After writing my last review, about how convincing I find the kids, I got to thinking, "Of course, in real life, they'd have had at least a fight or two. But that doesn't to into books much because no on wants to read that." So, first, kudos on remembering to mention that siblings are always going to fight. Second, I think its good that you touched on it, and didn't go into a lot of direct quotes. Kid fights that get real descriptive are even harder to read that they are to be around. Great chapter. I hope to read the whole thing in print as some point.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2020
    Thank you. I'm hoping to get it out in print next year.
Comment from equestrik
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What a tough situation this is but it seems to me that Jefferson can handle it. He seems to be able to handle it all with great patience and grace. What a calming spirit for those children.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.