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Par Angusta Ad Augusta

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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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As always--fast paced--meticulous details of person and place add color and interest--masterful dialog and fleshed-out, likeable characters. Fine work! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Oh,man lots of things are happening in this chapter and it's all about adjustment to new situations, physical conditions and emotions. Frankly I dislike that social worker, she is so mean. Poor guy is doing his best in his condition and he seems like the best fit for the guardian role. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from equestrik
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I like this chapter and truly, many social workers do come across as gruff and suspicious and critical, Perhaps you can bring in another one who is re-assigned to the children and paint her in a more compassionate light.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Thank you. :) Don't give away the ending. ;)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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A powerful story. I really enjoyed in this chapter the use of dialogue. You do an excellent job of sharing the tension using the dialogue. The story in this chapter is enjoyable and this was enjoyable to read. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.