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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(acting to weird s/b too) It's me again! These just keep popping up--can't resist--excellent flow--meaty piece, as always, excellent dialog. Keep it coming. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much.
Comment from equestrik
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I was relieved that Jefferson and Amy talked and sorted all of that out, at least for now. I am right there with the kids about Saturday's event at the book store. Good writing another good continuation of your story.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review and for your continuing support.
Comment from robyn corum
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T,

Interesting developments. I think this guy is taking to his new role really
well, though I'm surprised to hear the children are all doing so well.

I'm still having a problem with swapping povs, but I'll leave that to you.

Other notes:
1.) He had finished interviewing people for the time being
--> already used 'time being' in a paragraph up - at the end

2.) Texas went ahead and executed Jos√?¬© Medell√?¬≠n as scheduled in 2008.
--> evil eddie got you - need to eliminate those extra symbols

Thanks!


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2020
    Thank you. I'm working on the POV issue with some success.