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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Chapter 12, rearranged, of the fiction has an orderly and appealing taletelling, good plot development, realistic dialogues, good beginning and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Masterful narration and delightful dialog--snappy banter--characters well drawn--sensitive depiction of disabilities--give backstory in footnote! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
    Thank you. I'll try to expand on the backstory more. Been trying to figure out the best way to do that.
Comment from yespabee
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The dialogues at the restaurant are very lively. The event of petting the dog is good, plz make it more interesting, I suppose. The era of the happenings I missed, must read the earlier parts.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
    It's been an interesting experience writing/sharing this. Thanks for reading.