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3 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 12, rearranged, of the fiction has an orderly and appealing taletelling, good plot development, realistic dialogues, good beginning and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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This Chapter 12, rearranged, of the fiction has an orderly and appealing taletelling, good plot development, realistic dialogues, good beginning and curious ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Masterful narration and delightful dialog--snappy banter--characters well drawn--sensitive depiction of disabilities--give backstory in footnote! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Masterful narration and delightful dialog--snappy banter--characters well drawn--sensitive depiction of disabilities--give backstory in footnote! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2020
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Thank you. I'll try to expand on the backstory more. Been trying to figure out the best way to do that.
Comment from yespabee
The dialogues at the restaurant are very lively. The event of petting the dog is good, plz make it more interesting, I suppose. The era of the happenings I missed, must read the earlier parts.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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The dialogues at the restaurant are very lively. The event of petting the dog is good, plz make it more interesting, I suppose. The era of the happenings I missed, must read the earlier parts.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
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It's been an interesting experience writing/sharing this. Thanks for reading.
