This was an interesting read and kept the reader going through with ease. The only comment I would have is the frequent switch back and forth between the two scenes so frequently which seemed excessive for just one chapter. Otherwise, it was a good read and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2020
Yeah, that got a bit clunky. I've been trying to revise that. You should see the first draft. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing.
I like this chapter and even though it is hard that the children, especially Taylor were reminded of their parent's deaths, they got through it. Unfortunately it will come up a lot whether in school or out and about.