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Par Angusta Ad Augusta

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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Delightful banter--witty and a tad snarky in a friendly way--indeed, they had a deep conversation--I've with her on love at first sight being bunk! Fine work! Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 07-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 07-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from equestrik
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I like how we can see and follow along as Jefferson and Monique live their lives but we can see past and keep hoping that things between them keep developing-here in this chapter, I see hope as they are now friends. :)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly. The story is in the journey. I had fun bringing them along through every little step. More to come soon. ;)
Comment from TommyWrites
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This is a great chapter!
I think I have read one other chapter of yours, but I'm not certain if I reviewed it or not.
Nevertheless, this is an interesting story you have here!
Your whole story line flows very nicely, and from just reading this, I have a basic understanding of the book. And I wasn't confused anywhere.
All of your characters are excellently crafted, and are relatable.
I think you have something good here!
TommyWrites~

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2020
    Thank you. I hope a publisher will agree with you someday.