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Faith

Faith is put to the test

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Comment from pome lover
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Bless your heart, I am so sorry. That seems almost too much to bear.
I imagine the rest of your family and friends are helping you cope with such a huge loss.
I know it's easy for someone - especially a total stranger, to say, remember the good times, the happy times, but it does help a little. At least it did, for me. Your poem is heart felt and lovely.
Best wishes,
pome lover

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


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    Thank you
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Joanne, this is a sad story in a poem. To love one loved one in a year is very, very sad, but to lose three is tragic. I agree that one's faith can be sorely tested in a case like this. But you sound like you are optimistic that faith will be restored. It helps to cry - it does not solve anything but crying is good. Well done and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you Dorothy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about faith and trust in God that will guide us through every difficult situation in our life.

Typos
dealt an(a) hand we can't seem to understand
burdens we bare(bear)
believe that god(God) wanted you for a greater plan.
pain gets easier to bare(bear).

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much! 🙂thanks for correcting my typos!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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The tragedy of loss can his us hard and we need all the support we can get in times of trouble and my prayers are with you, stay strong. A fine presentation Joanne, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


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Comment from Patty Palmer
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First of all let me tell you that I'm so sorry for your huge loss. One in a year is terrible, but three in one year must be unbearable! Your poem is beautifully written and feels very consoling. May your faith bring you peace at this troubling time. Great job!
Patty

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


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Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
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I'm sorrow about your loses
2007 I lost my mother my youngest so who was 32 on Christmas day, two grandson my daughters two best friends who was like a daughter they all had a tumor in the brain with in three months.
This month i lost my baby sister to the virus So I know how you feel God gave us strength to hang on a be strong
Thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you so much sorry for your loss as well!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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First my deepest condolences for you and your family.
The well written poem expresses your pain and deep sorrow.
While showing your struggles, your faith is your hope.
Beatifully written


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This poem speaks you are on test of faith ever, you have lost three loved ones in a year; you believe God has wider plan and your faith will bring you happiness tomorrow; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Joanne

This is an excellent entry for the My Faith poetry prompt. I love the exuberant faith that fills each crevice of this poem. Lovely job and perfect execution.

Melissa

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you 🙂
Comment from Vanna1
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Oh how sad. Sorry for your losses. I can't imagine your feelings. This is a good poem full of emotion and the realities of life. Good presentation as well.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2020
    Thank you