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Par Angusta Ad Augusta

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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
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This is very good, and descriptive. Should have read it from chapter one, I think I will go back and do that. The characters are all quite descriptive and interesting, I will be following you.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you. Welcome aboard.
Comment from lancellot
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Hmm, interesting short scenes. I'm guessing jumping between scenes often during a chapter is part of the style of this book. The writing and editing looks clean. I saw nothing sticking out.

Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from roof35
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This is well written and moves the story along nicely. You have likable characters and the children are typical kids for the most part. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.