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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Wow--intense--startling revelations--even though I'm reading out of sequence I feel each chapter is complete in itself so it doesn't bother me--I'm impressed that you write about so-called "disabled" people who have love lives--hopefully will educate some. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
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This seems to have realistic action, dialogue, and characters. A break-up scene is never fun for a main character, or a real person. It sounds like Jefferson went from hopeful to disheartened. This part of the dialogue points out that Jefferson has strong qualities: "I'm gonna go catch a few minutes' sleep in my office," Jefferson said. "Then I'll grab some coffee, teach, and just wait for today to end."
Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from equestrik
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This is certainly coming along and developing. We see more and more of who Jefferson is and what his character is. Of course, this break-up had to happen. :)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2020
    Thank you. No trying to think ahead of me. ;)