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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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(snuck s/b sneaked; typo whit e Nike s/b white Nike; how old is Aaron?)

I'm reading these chapters out of order according to how they pop up--they are consistently gripping! Fine work. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you. Aaron is a teenager.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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This was a great chapter that has dealt with some pretty tough issues and the characters handled them well. I enjoy reading content when it deals with events that are uncomfortable in every day life. Your characters are real and I enjoy your chapters. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, we never know how anything is going to work out if we don't at least give it a try. Of course, we don't always get a chance for do-overs if we don't get things right the first time. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2020
    True to all your points. Thanks for reading.