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Through Trial to Triumph

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Another gripping piece--these people all seem real--as does their conversation--you fleshed out grandparents by relating their ongoing grief. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ooops, this chapter should be rated plus G:) maybe this is how you start a family aka relationship. All is well when it ends well. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 30-Sep-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from equestrik
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Well! I finally came about that they each said the three big words! Good development and story continuation. I like that Monique set boundaries.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2020


reply by the author on 29-Sep-2020
    Thank you. A few twists and turns to go.