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Par Angusta Ad Augusta

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Through Trial to Triumph

5 total reviews 
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
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Although I've only read a few chapters, I can honestly say you have written a fine book here. I read the beginning and a few after the middle and the end and I have an impression of a very well-written story. The plot is excellent. The ending is very satisfying.

Ralf

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Chapter 38 of the book at last reveals one more secret through an artistic taletelling, fostered by balanced plot development and realistic characters and dialogues to the cause of thematic maturation with a resolved and happy ending; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from AnnieDawn
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So this is the final chapter of your book? I am disappointed as I would like it to go on forever. Just kidding but it has been very, very interesting and I have really enjoyed the characters. I hope I have not offended with corrections as I know that you are blind, but you do such an excetional job writing and the characters do come alive in your story. This has been exciting. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2020
    Thank you for all your support. Cunstructive critisism is why I come to sites/groups like this. I'm already playing with ideas for a sequel. ;)
Comment from equestrik
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This was indeed an unexpected and new twist. What a surprise for Jefferson. It is obvious you are skilled at constructing a good and cohesive story.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2020
    Thank you kindly.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Stunning revelation! Where does he go with that one, I wonder. Congrats for completing the book. Gripping--grabbed and held--skillfully rendered dialog--fast-paced. Cheers. LIZ (curiosity peaked--do you perhaps mean piqued?)

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2020
    Thank you for reading it.