Football Chapter 23 part 2
A mother faces life's struggles.



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Rating of the story Take One! Take Two, Three, Etc. by Begin Again

Beautiful, beautiful. Very honest, and very wise. Love the saying too. Fortunately God forgives, offers us a new start every morning, and uses people to bless and encourage each other, as you are doing. Thanks for the thoughts. Well written.


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Life is a big-time scene to be captured by a high-resolution camera!:) When images become unclear, take another shot. If that doesn't work out, just be silent and contemplate. Then life becomes more than reality. I simply loved your post. It is uplifting. Cheers!


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Rating of the poem Miss Cookie's Legacy by lyenochka

A lovely tribute to Miss Cookie. She reviewed some of my work, and I hers, and she was always gracious and encouraging. Sad to hear of her death, but lovely to know she is at peace and will be in perfect health with her Saviour.
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Rating of the story Ask Patch & PC August 2021 by lyenochka

So many amazing and humorous photos on this post! Apart from the many questions and answers. Sunny's Mama has one question this time. When she picked him up to protect him from two escaped very lively young adult German Shepherd dogs, who were jumping all over her, paws on shoulders and their faces level with hers, was this the right thing to do, to pick him up? Maybe they just wanted to play with Sunny. Her instinct was that that was dangerous. (They didn't try to bite her.) Do big dogs ever just play with little ones or does it quickly turn into a kill? Has anybody else had any such experience? One friend said to throw a piece of clothing over the head of an attacking dog to distract it, but what about two dogs? Thanks for your help, and maybe other strategies, although I hope for no repeats! Thanks for a great column.
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Startling bit of whimsy--rat fink and Twain!!! I'll stick with the latter. This is off-the-wall--an original for sure. Cute ditty with amusing rhyme scheme.


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