12-Nov-2020
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Healing Muse,
I had not read any of your work before- so I went to check out your portfolio where I found this little gem.
Buffet is a wonderful quirky write and I feasted on the meaning of it for some time. Creative playtime indeed! This poem gave this reader a full course of laughter and fun.
Well done.
Sammielwf

09-Jul-2020
Review For Fireworks!
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Evil knows no limits and is usually involved in things we cannot see. A scary entry for the flash fiction, dear Muse. Sending you my best as always, and my best for the flash.
Sal xoxo

09-Jul-2020
Review For Fireworks!
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I think this is a fun entry for the 75 Words Flash Fiction contest.
This short story is well told.
Well done and I wish you good luck with the contest.
Sharon

09-Jul-2020
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I can identify with your words here as I often need either a knife, hammer or scissors to tackle the packaging around food and other items! You presented the problem here with much humour, I am still smiling, love Dolly x
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08-Jul-2020
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I think I've got a few of those bags too. I can understand the inspiration for this flash fiction story. They are way more than kid proof. Nicely done flash fiction. Good luck in the contest.
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08-Jul-2020
Review For Fireworks!
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LOL. Yes, it sure seems like the fireworks will be ramped up from your earlier adventures. The ones most all of us can relate to. Great job and thanks for sharing. Reviewed with blinders on.
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08-Jul-2020
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LOVE the use of nature's food trying to open the Mylar bags (most likely with food that tastes like cardboard - funny stuff. With Covid-19 there probably IS a grocery packaging assoc. :P
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07-Jul-2020
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(pointing to--change to "I point to"--then omit another word to keep count--such as evil or wicked) Delightful--I just posted a flash on the subject of those infernal paper tabs--love your sea/tropical theme--I used rocks and scissors in mine. Cheers. LIZ
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07-Jul-2020
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Oh, that packaging drives me up the wall, especially the bottles that have the caps sealed on and have to be carved off with a knife only to reveal that glued on seal with the little tab that is impossible to grab, so only another stab with the knife will do. Actually I would like to see those packagers stranded on that island!
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07-Jul-2020
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You penned a very clever and creative write here with just seventy five words. We think it's rather funny too. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.
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