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"Exposure - the weapon
Dark to Light"


Exposure - perhaps the only effective weapon available.

Dark to Light - the process mostly all awoken and aware citizens are participating in worldwide.

And I do believe the inhuman individuals who are/have been involved in this crime against humanity are about to be exposed, big time.

I find your six well chosen words effective and apposite with regard to the current state of affairs, and I wish you the best of luck in this contest.

Regards, Blu

17-Jan-2021
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This is a very well written and well worded contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive words that are very true. Many have no idea that satan is very real and he has so little time to do his evil deeds. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

18-Nov-2020
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This is a very beautiful poem written in 6 words. I LOVE it!

I haven't gotten time to be on FS too much, with school, extra homework, and other classes. The most I can do is write something for school, then post it on FS, just for fun (and reply to the comments, of course)! But I'm really glad I got some time today to read this poem. As I said before, I really like it!

-Tanvi Pauddar :)

04-Nov-2020
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Thank you for writing this powerful piece on what's going on in today's world.
If you check back on FanStory, you will see this review. Our mutual friend, Sally, noticed that I wasn't on the website for the last two weeks (actually I was, but not as active as at some other times), and when I answered her message, I told her that my husband and I had become involved, along with others in our church, with the cause against human trafficking.
Sally immediately thought of you, and mentioned your name to me.
I hope you will not disappear completely from FS, but would like to keep in touch with you. We can pray for one another. The spiritual warfare is real. I will be praying for you, Diane.
This is a very fateful night. I don't know what the outcome of yesterday's election will be, but no matter what it is, we won't give up, and we won't stop praying. Amen.

01-Aug-2020
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Hi Diana,
Re these ironic, helpless missing children, staggering numbers,
I enjoin you 100 times over in prayers for this vast massacre and
abuse of children worldwide! Your message is right on....Exposure of
it, all the forms of it, is only way to keep it out in the open, so often
and so long, till it can no longer be ignored or kept down in its
decaadent darkness and despair. More action is needed direly for
intervention by those that have power or influence to do so, but
are blind eyed and cold hearted about this atrocity.
Great to see you back, and understand periodic absence. Do take
care, and thank you for the red flag alert on this unpardonable
tragedy. Prayer may seem too little, but far better than none or
too few. Children lost so horribly ought never be hopeless.
Love, blessings, Ronni

01-Aug-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is clear and concise. Well written. I like how you structured this poem. Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!

01-Aug-2020
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Poetry itself is a powerful weapon and I appreciate you using it as a vehicle to demonstrate a sad reality that must be surfaced to kill. Good luck!

01-Aug-2020
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Very powerful piece that captures the seriousness of what many turn a blind eye to. It is an issue that needs to be addressed. The danger is real and the children are the most vulnerable. Thank you for highligting it.

01-Aug-2020
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Hello Diana,
Thank you for bringing this despicable situation to light in your well-crafted 6 word poem. Child-trafficking, pedophilia, etc. must be addressed and stopped! There is far too much denial and silence, but I do believe times are changing as more and more individuals speak out against this tragedy that affects all of us on many levels...

Take Care!
diane

01-Aug-2020
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Yes I was on a mission trip to Cambodia that's involved in "buying" back children sold into that sort of industry, I'm appalled that a child can be exploited into this industry, those stats are reprehensible, beautifully written, well dine. Blessings, Roy



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