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Garden of Faith
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The Big, Bad Wolf
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Sleepover at Grandma's House finished first in the contest "True Supernatural Story" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Yo'll Always Be My Baby finished second in the contest "70 Word Flash Fiction" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Her Happiness Mask finished third in the contest "This Sentence Starts The Story" |
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Leann DS: I've been thinking about mastery/Bob. Does anyone know how he is doing? |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Come and play with me! finished third in the contest "Online Personal Ad" |
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Smiles and hugs, Carol - | ||
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Jake By the Lake finished third in the contest "Cumulative Tale Contest" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Congratulations! More Than One Way won the contest "Take A Photo Poetry" |
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WE MUST KEEP THIS IN MIND.... You stepped inside this world of mine, Where scented air and loud plants spark Panoramas so grand and fine! You too can see through blackest dark. Next time you're on a wooded path Or in your garden, think of me and of my all black photograph.... There's more than just one way to see. THANKS SO MUCH, DEAR FRIEND. Smiles and hugs, Carol - | ||
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Moving and beautiful! Diane - | ||
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: I Want To See the World finished second in the contest "Short story writing" |
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I loved your bold adieu to the reader.... With all that said, I am begging you: be proud of your ass. Shake it. Wiggle it. Bare it. Let the whole world enjoy your ass. Let your ass enjoy the whole world. Asses everywhere deserve it Smiles and hugs, my friend. Always, Carol - | ||
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Accepting Grace finished third in the contest "Seven Words or Less Poem" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Death By Broken Heart finished second in the contest "New Arrival Flash Fiction" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Last Ride On the Party Train finished first in the contest "Visited by Death" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Celebrating Life finished first in the contest "Easter poem for children." |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Hoodie Season finished second in the contest "Child's memory of changing seasons" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: When, Finally, I See Your Face finished second in the contest "Write a Kyrielle" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Forever Grateful finished second in the contest "Gratitude expressed in a poem" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Among the Acorns and Pinecones finished second in the contest "Ghost Story" |
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Leann DS: There is a 100 word/fiction contest approaching. Could someone please tell me if the 100 words includes the title or not? Thank you. |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: My Faith Calms the Storm finished second in the contest "Faith Poetry Contest" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Bartering Barber Bob finished second in the contest "Alliteration Celebration" |
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Leann DS: Fan art tips needed, please! When searching for images using fan art review, I cannot seem to find anything even close to my search terms. Does anybody have any tips for using the search on that site? Help! And thank you. |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Puddles and Cuddles finished third in the contest "Tyburn poetry contest" |
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Any Pet Will Do finished second in the contest "Kiddies motivational poem" |
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Leann DS: Happy 2021, everyone. I have a few thoughts about this website. I joined because I thought I would get some helpful feedback about my writing; and I thought I may be able to help some others by providing them with the same. what I have discovered is that almost everybody gets a five star rating and nobody says anything very helpful to encourage stronger writing. I was told by a fellow member that a four star rating is considered an insult. What the heck? It reminds me of some of those contestants on American idol who can't sing their way out of a bucket, but along the way, someone has told them they are talented. They suck. Now they're embarrassing themselves and do not have any idea that they are. I always think? "Don't they have anybody who loves them enough to be honest with them?" When I first started doing reviews, I was basically basing my reviews on a grading scale like a teacher, as I am a former teacher. Five stars would be an A, four stars would be a B, etc. apparently, people are offended by this honesty. Then, I have entered several contests. Some of the entries are just outstanding! And they don't win. They're not even in the top three. This tells me the people voting don't know what they're doing. It's pretty discouraging. and I am not talking about myself not winning. Some of my contest entries just weren't very good, but there were others that were and they still did not win. I really wish that there were competent judges and reviewers who could give constructive criticism without fear of being outcast and ridiculed by the other members for being honest. I am definitely not talking about all the members here. There are many very talented and creative writers in this forum. But some of you? Yeah? You're not good. I wish someone would tell you what to do differently so you could improve your writing, because it's clear that you enjoy it. |
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Leann DS: Is there a place on here for sharing song lyrics? |
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Leann DS: I am a 52 year old mother of three, stepmother of two, and grandmother of 10. I have always enjoyed writing, but by no means, am I a professional. All constructive criticism is welcome, as I joined this community so I could improve my writing. I am totally blind and have been for the last seven years, and therefore, I may occasionally have some typos or formatting errors, but please bear with me. I am more interested in my content, style, form, and ability to evoke an emotional response of some sort. If someone is here to assist me, I can add images to my work, but otherwise, I have not figured out how to do that yet. |
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I?d be willing to help you with selecting and posting an image. I also know how to ad inages within your entry - | ||
I?d be willing to help you with selecting and posting an image. I also know how to add inages within your entry - | ||
I?d be willing to help you with selecting and posting an image. I also know how to add images within your entry. Doable but much more time consuming. I read you piece about 5-star ratings. You are correct - they appear to be meanungless. - | ||
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![]() FanStory wrote to Leann DS: Creating Christmas finished first in the contest "A favorite Christmas place" |
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Creating Christmas was such a wonderful poem. Congratulations on your first place ribbon. Sammielwf - | ||
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