General Poetry posted February 22, 2021


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A Better Tomb

The Coldness

by Carlos' girl

The cold air, the cold light
I don't think that they're right
A terrible accident is all they said
On the pavement where you bled

If I could just not be
If I could just not see
If I could stop that day
On the pavement where you lay

Let me see your face
In a warm safe place
Where I can be with you again
Where I can talk to you my friend

Not like that, not that day
On the pavement where you lay





























For anyone who lost somone in a motorcycle accident
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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