General Poetry posted September 19, 2021


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City at Night

The Sweet Spot

by Carlos' girl

You already made me fall
Cannot wait to get your call
Dressing up and I don't rush
All I think about is us

Where you come and where you go
It don't matter I just know
It's suspended disbelief
Maybe I don't want to sleep

It's excitement doorbell rings
Don't care what tomorrow brings
Fall in love again like that
When I take your coat and hat

In a city made of steel
Your love knows just how I feel
My reflection in the mirror
Turn around yeah you are here





How one person finds another in the big city is a mystery
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